Made changes mentioned by Bella

1 files changed, 12 insertions, 11 deletions

diff --git a/presentation.tex b/presentation.tex
index 1077466..c15560e 100644
--- a/presentation.tex
+++ b/presentation.tex
@@ -58,11 +58,11 @@ Education}
 \begin{frame}
 \frametitle{FOSS}
 \begin{definition}
-\alert{FOSS} stands for Free and Open Source Software in Science and Engineering
+\alert{FOSS} stands for Free and Open-source Software in Science and Engineering
 \end{definition}
 \end{frame}
 
-\subsection{What can users do?}
+\subsection{What users can do?}
 \begin{frame}
 \frametitle{What users can do?}
 \begin{block}{Benefits}
@@ -76,17 +76,17 @@ Education}
 
 \subsection{For whom?}
 \begin{frame}
-\frametitle{FOSS is advantageous for}
+\frametitle{FOSS is befitting for}
 \begin{enumerate}
-\item Private Industries \pause
+\item Academic Institutions\pause
 \item Entrepreneurs \pause
 \item Defence Establishments \pause
 \item Research Organisations \pause
-\item Academic Institutions\pause
+\item Private Industries \pause
 \item Individual User \pause
 \end{enumerate}
 \begin{block}{FOSS for everyone} \pause
-FOSS is for anyone who uses Computer to get things done quickly and efficiently. 
+FOSS is for anyone who uses Computer to get things done quickly and efficiently
 \end{block}
 \end{frame}
 
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ Education \pause
 
 \subsection{Thrust Areas}
 \begin{frame}
-\frametitle{Thrust Activities}
+\frametitle{Thrust Areas}
 \begin{itemize}
 \item SDES Course \pause
 \item Workshops  \pause
@@ -195,19 +195,20 @@ Software Development Techniques for Scientists and Engineers
 \item Equips a student with various FOSS tools for curricular purposes \pause
 \item For students of BE/BTech and ME/MTech programmes \pause
 \item Currently in curriculum : IIT Bombay, Varanasi and Chennai \pause
-\item Coordinators' workshop was held in September 2011 \pause
+\item SDES Coordinators' workshop was held in September 2011 \pause
 \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
 
 \begin{frame}
-\frametitle{Teacher's training Workshop}
+\frametitle{WORKSHOP}
+\framesubtitle{Teacher's training Workshop}
 \begin{itemize}
-\item Introduce the faculty of various engineering colleges to advantages of FOSS. \pause
+\item Introduce the faculty of various science and engineering colleges to advantages of FOSS. \pause
 \item Motivate them to include SDES course in their curriculum. \pause
 \item Conducted in 2 parts
 \begin{enumerate}
 \item At IIT \pause
-\item Through AVIEW \pause
+\item Through A-VIEW \pause
 \end{enumerate}
 \end{itemize}