Typos corrections suggested by KD for the about pages.

3 files changed, 17 insertions, 17 deletions

diff --git a/project/templates/about/accommodation.html b/project/templates/about/accommodation.html
index 0a8c755..909d431 100644
--- a/project/templates/about/accommodation.html
+++ b/project/templates/about/accommodation.html
@@ -1,14 +1,15 @@
 {% extends "base.html" %}
 {% block content %}
 <h1>Accommodation for delegates</h1>
-<p class="noindent">40 rooms have been reserved for the male students
-and faculty on a triple sharing basis. In total we can accommodate 120
-male participants.  We also have reserved 10 rooms to female
-participants on twin sharing basis. Thus we can provide accommodation
-for 20 female participants. People who pay the accommodation fee
-through our fee payment process will be alloted accommodation on
-first-come-first-serve basis. For further details visit:
-<a href="http://scipy.in/scipyin/2010/about/fees/">
+<p class="noindent">Forty rooms have been reserved for male students
+and faculty on a triple sharing basis in the hostels at IIIT. In total,
+we can accommodate 120 male participants. We also have reserved 10
+rooms for female participants on twin sharing basis. Thus, we can
+provide accommodation for 20 female participants. People who pay the
+accommodation fee through our fee payment process will be allotted
+accommodation on first-come-first-serve basis. Accommodation cannot
+be assured if the fee is not paid by December 10th, 2010. For further
+details visit: <a href="http://scipy.in/scipyin/2010/about/fees/">
 http://scipy.in/scipyin/2010/about/fees/</a>
 </p>
 
diff --git a/project/templates/about/sprints.html b/project/templates/about/sprints.html
index 2a67cec..4f27392 100644
--- a/project/templates/about/sprints.html
+++ b/project/templates/about/sprints.html
@@ -60,8 +60,7 @@ available.
 </p>
 <p>
 Participants of Sprints who make a significant contribution will be
-given swag. The sprint lead, will choose the participants who are
-eligible for the swag. 
+given swag. The sprint lead will choose the participants eligible for swag. 
 </p>
 
 {% endblock content %}
diff --git a/project/templates/about/venue.html b/project/templates/about/venue.html
index de2c37f..6638897 100644
--- a/project/templates/about/venue.html
+++ b/project/templates/about/venue.html
@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@
   <img src="/static/img/isb_logo.gif"
   alt="Indian School of Business Logo"
   title="Indian School of Business" /></a><br /><br /><br/>
-  The SciPy.in 2010 Conference is being held at
+  The SciPy.in 2010 conference is being held at the
   <a href="http://www.isb.edu/Campustour/academic_khemka_auditorium.html">
-  Khemka Auditorium</a> at  
+  Khemka Auditorium</a> of the
   <a href="http://www.isb.edu/">Indian School of Business</a>(ISB) in
   Hyderabad. ISB is one of India's top management schools and is a
   world-renowned (and globally top-ranked) B-school.
@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@
   <img src="/static/img/mahindra_satyam_logo.jpg"
   alt="Mahindra Satyam Logo"
   title="Mahindra Satyam Logo" /></></a><br/><br/><br/>
-  SciPy.in 2010 Tutorial is being held at
-  <a href="http://www.mahindrasatyam.com/careers/crossover/work_life_environment.asp ">Danube Hall at 
+  The SciPy.in 2010 tutorials are being held at the
+  Danube Hall at <a href="http://www.mahindrasatyam.com/careers/crossover/work_life_environment.asp ">
   Mahindra Satyam Learning World</a> in Hyderabad's famed
   <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HITEC_City">HITEC City</a>.
   </a><a href="http://www.mahindrasatyam.com/">Mahindra Satyam</a>
@@ -44,14 +44,14 @@
   <a href="http://www.iiit.ac.in/">
   <img src="/static/img/iiith_logo.gif" alt="IIIT-H Logo"
   title="IIIT-H Logo" /></a><br/><br/><br/>
-  SciPy.in 2010 Sprints are held held in various labs and seminar
+  The SciPy.in 2010 sprints will be held in various labs and seminar
   halls at IIIT Hyderabad. The directions to these exact locations
   will be updated soon.
   <a href="http://www.iiit.ac.in/">IIIT Hyderabad</a> is an autonomous,
   research university offering under-graduate and graduate education
   in Computer Science, Electronics and Communications, and their
-  applications in other domains.  have offered a number of labs and seminar
-  halls to suit the needs of the sprints.
+  applications in other domains. They have offered a number of labs
+  and seminar halls to suit the needs of the sprints.
 </p>
 </div>
 {% endblock content %}