Updated as per feedback

1 files changed, 24 insertions, 15 deletions

diff --git a/tutorial_2_django_proj/slides.md b/tutorial_2_django_proj/slides.md
index 4c55e59..69a5642 100644
--- a/tutorial_2_django_proj/slides.md
+++ b/tutorial_2_django_proj/slides.md
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ Tutorial: Creating Your First Django Project
 
 Slide 1 [00:08 | 00:08]
 -------------
-** Creating Your First Django Project **
+Title Slide: ** Creating a Django Project **
 
 Slide 2 [00:13 | 00:21]
 --------------
@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ Slide 2 [00:13 | 00:21]
 **Learning Objectives**
 
 In this tutorial, we will learn to;
-  - create django project
-  - initialize django app
+  - Create a django project
+  - Initialize a django app
 
 Slide 3 [00:13 | 00:34]
 ---------------
@@ -28,12 +28,13 @@ Slide 4 [00:15 | 00:49]
 **Pre-requisites**
 
 In order to follow this tutorial, you need to know;
-  - django installation and virtual environment
+  - how to use a virtual environment
+  - how to install django
   - If not, see the relevant django tutorial on http://spoken-tutorial.org
 	
 Demonstration: [01:15 | 2:04]
 ------------
-- Revist the virtual environment created in previous tutorial.
+- Revisit the virtual environment created in previous tutorial.
  - Activate the virtual environment
   - Create a new directory
     - mkdir myproject
@@ -41,9 +42,9 @@ Demonstration: [01:15 | 2:04]
     - cd myproject
   - Run the command
     - *django-admin startproject mysite*
-    This will create a django project 'mysite'
+  - This will create a django project 'mysite'
     
-Demonstrations: [01:00 | 3:04]
+Demonstration: [01:00 | 3:04]
 -------------
   - So django project is
     - collection of settings for an instance of Django
@@ -68,16 +69,21 @@ Slide 5: [00:10 | 3:14]
                   
 Demonstration [01:00 | 4:14]
 ---------------
-  - Check if you have setup Django project correctly;
+  - Now let us run the django server and check;
     - *python manage.py runserver*
-    You will see that the server is running at the address shown.
-    Go to the address via web browser
-    We see the django's index page- "It works"
+  - You will see that the server is running at the address shown.
+  - Go to the address via web browser
+  - We see the django's index page- "It works"
+
+Slide
+-----------
+**Initializing a Django App**
+  - A Django project typically contains one or more apps
+  - A Django app performs a particular task
+  - Let us create a blogging app called 'blog'
 
 Demonstration [01:30 | 5:44]
 --------------
-**Initializing a Django App**
-  - Create a blogging app called blog
   - Run the command;
     - *python manage.py startapp blog*
     This creates an app 'blog'
@@ -85,6 +91,7 @@ Demonstration [01:30 | 5:44]
   - Execute *cd blog/*
   
   - You will see the file structure(This can be in slide or terminal)
+
         blog/
            |-> __init__.py
            |-> admin.py
@@ -94,12 +101,14 @@ Demonstration [01:30 | 5:44]
            |-> models.py
            |-> tests.py
            `-> views.py
+	   
   - Return to the parent directory
     - *cd ..*
 
-Demonstration [00:]
+Demonstration [01:00 | 6:44]
 ------------
 ** Adding the app to the settings file**
+  - For the project to detect an app, we need to add the app name to settings.py
   - Open the *settings.py* file
   - Go to *INSTALLED_APPS* and add *'blog.apps.BlogConfig',* to the list so it should now look like this;
 
@@ -113,7 +122,7 @@ Demonstration [00:]
         'django.contrib.staticfiles',
     ]
 
-Slide 13 [00:15 | 05:55]
+Slide 13 [00:25 | 07:15]
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 ** Assignment ** 
  - Create a new project and app