From 136fffb18cd9799519b096778d7249c1ed2359fa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Puneeth Chaganti
Date: Fri, 5 Nov 2010 21:19:11 +0530
Subject: Changes to accessing parts of arrays during recording.

---
 accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst | 26 ++++++++++++--------------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

(limited to 'accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst')

diff --git a/accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst b/accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst
index a1d30f6..d99d3f8 100644
--- a/accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst
+++ b/accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst
@@ -120,12 +120,11 @@ or
   
   C[-1] = 0
 
-Now, how do we access one column of C? As with accessing
-individual elements, the column is the second parameter to be
-specified (after the comma). The first parameter, is now replaced
-with a ``:`` to say, that we want all the elements of that
-dimension, instead of one particular element. We access the third
-column by
+Now, how do we access one column of C? As with accessing individual
+elements, the column is the second parameter to be specified (after
+the comma). The first parameter, is replaced with a ``:``. This
+specifies that we want all the elements of that dimension, instead of
+just one particular element. We access the third column by
 
 ::
   
@@ -263,11 +262,10 @@ gives the elements [11, 21, 31, 41]
 
 gives the elements [21, 31, 41, 0]
 
-Note that when specifying ranges, if you are starting from or
-going up-to the end, the corresponding element may be dropped. So,
-in the previous example to obtain [11, 21, 31, 41], we could have
-simply said, 
-::
+Note that when specifying ranges, if you are starting from the
+beginning or going up-to the end, the corresponding element may be
+dropped. So, in the previous example to obtain [11, 21, 31, 41], we
+could have simply said, ::
 
   C[:4, 0]
 
@@ -317,7 +315,7 @@ Following is an exercise that you must do.
 
 %%5%% Obtain the square in the center of the image.
 
-Following is an exercise that you must do. 
+Please, pause the video here. Do the exercises and then continue. 
 
 {{ show slide containing Solution 5 }} 
 
@@ -377,7 +375,7 @@ gives the elements [[12, 0], [42, 0]]
 
 gives the elements [[12, 13, 14], [0, 0, 0]]
 
-Now, that we know how to stride over an image, we can drop
+Now, that we know how to stride over an array, we can drop
 alternate rows and columns out of the image in I. 
 ::
 
@@ -417,5 +415,5 @@ Thank you!
    mode: rst
    indent-tabs-mode: nil
    sentence-end-double-space: nil
-   fill-column: 75
+   fill-column: 70
    End:
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From fb5e3fc998afbd9fd3c17da123cc61c541987118 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bhanukiran
Date: Sun, 7 Nov 2010 01:17:25 +0530
Subject: language checked for `accessing pieces arrays`

---
 accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst | 5 +++--
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

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diff --git a/accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst b/accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst
index d99d3f8..10d3e3e 100644
--- a/accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst
+++ b/accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst
@@ -16,10 +16,11 @@
 
 ..   1. getting started with arrays
 
-     
+.. #[anand: internal reviewer not mentioned]     
 .. Author              : Puneeth
    Internal Reviewer   : 
    External Reviewer   :
+   Language Reviewer   : Bhanukiran
    Checklist OK?       : <put date stamp here, if OK> [2010-10-05]
 
 Script
@@ -223,7 +224,7 @@ We say,
 
 to get the elements of rows indexed from 0 to 3, 3 not included
 and column indexed 2. Note that, the index before the colon is
-included and the index after it is not included, in the slice that
+included and the index after it is not included in the slice that
 we have obtained. This is very similar to the ``range`` function,
 where ``range`` returns a list, in which the upper limit or stop
 value is not included.
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From 235dda893789f4c0a59935de5257de04fc99bc1c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Anand Raj
Date: Sun, 7 Nov 2010 01:18:26 +0530
Subject: checklist OK for `accessing pieces arrays`

---
 accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

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diff --git a/accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst b/accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst
index 10d3e3e..9599835 100644
--- a/accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst
+++ b/accessing-pieces-arrays/script.rst
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
    Internal Reviewer   : 
    External Reviewer   :
    Language Reviewer   : Bhanukiran
-   Checklist OK?       : <put date stamp here, if OK> [2010-10-05]
+   Checklist OK?       : <06-11-2010, Anand,  OK> [2010-10-05]
 
 Script
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